My Favorite Photo
The Place: at Tangkuban Perahu Mountain, Bandung, West Java, Indonesia
When? : when I was in Senior High School, 2 years ago
So 2 years ago, my batch go to Bandung city for a "school visit" event, this event is routinely held every year, and indeed one of the school programs, so my batch goes to visit one of the best cities in Indonesia, namely is Bandung city , there we visited the best campus in indonesia, of course the best campus in west java like ITB and Unpad, there we also visited which is other people said the best high school in Indonesia, namely is SMA 3 Bandung, after that we also go to someplace in Bandung and enjoyed the tourist places there, one of them when we left to Tangkuban Perahu, it's a very beautiful place, amazing place, and we take lots of photos there, awesome places, I want to go there again.
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I thought you have to correction the first paragraph. Change word goes become Went, because this sentence use past perfect, right?*CMIIW
BalasHapusUm Ghasan I need to correct this for you. "at every moment we take evidence by taking pictures" I get what you mean but the word "evidence" appears to out of place here, so I think you should switch it with more suitable word. Keep spirit Ghasan!
BalasHapuswau , simple but good experience with your friend in tangkuban perahu ...maybe you may invited me to join to tangkuban perahu again yaaa....wwkkkww
BalasHapusIt's all good Gassan ...but you've to take more attention before publish your article because I found that you aren't use capital for 'I' and capital to write a city like "west java"
BalasHapusBe careful with the capital words and I think it's better if the word "namely" changed into "named". You did a great job , San! Sepirit!!
BalasHapusGood experience ghassan! Keep writing!
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