My Ideal Partner
What kind of partner do I want ? So, the first,I want a partner who likes football or who understands football, because I like football very much, but I don't want her to be a soccer player, but just understand a little about football, because if we just like football, it will be very awesome,we can discuss football in spare time, watch football matches together, watch at home or even watch live in the stadium, it will be really cool, for that I want her to know a little about football, the second is, I want someone who is kind-hearted, who sincerely loves me without looking at treasure or my face, who diligently prays and knows religion, it really makes me comfortable and loves her very much, and the last, because I am a man of course, the criteria for the woman I like is "beautiful", beautiful inside and beautiful outside ,because if she is beautiful but her heart is ugly, it's the same, I hope to get a woman in accordance with my criteria, aahahahaha
Im sorry if so many mistake on my grammar, dont forget to comment guys
Thank you :)
I think the word "like" have to be likes bacause it is for women. And for me you have try to combine your sentence to be more compact.
BalasHapusOkee, thank u very much ifaa
HapusKtbffh righttt??soon stamford bridge 👌 but this is ur blog san so u don't have to say sorry abour ur wrong grammar.. u and us still in learning process sooo keep spirit!!
BalasHapusOf course ktbffh !! , ahahaha thank you icaa
HapusWow , so cool yeah ghasan , your blog is good
BalasHapusThank you brother
Hapusas long as you want to try and dont give up, surely you will be able to speak English
BalasHapusThank you my friend 👍
HapusI hope you will get your ideal partner soon, Ghassan. I think in the words "so the first,I want who like football" you can write it like "So, first I want a partner who like football." Practice makes perfect and keep spirit!!!
BalasHapusThank you very much lulaa
HapusWaw, that's a good blog.. in my mind its more suitable if you change ''the second i want someone'' become ''second, i want someone...'' or you can use ''the second is, i want someone...'' . Keep up your works Ghassan!!
BalasHapusThank you very much auraa
HapusWaw thats good Ghasan, i think you can take point (.) in your article so the sentence more efficient. Overall thats good. Good Job Ghasan!!!
BalasHapusAhahahaha thank you winda 👍
HapusNyaw nyaw... It'll be more romantic if you explain to her what is football and how to play and explain the rules. So simply you make her like football... hehehe... Anyway, it's a great job. Hope you can find someone just like what you want...
BalasHapusAhahhahaa you rightt, thanks mandaa
HapusGreat criteria, Ghassan wkwk.
BalasHapusBut you have to put a point at the end of your sentence and use uppercase letters for letters I and S in “So, the first blabla”.
Oohh okee, thanks mayy
HapusGood criteria, Ghassan...
BalasHapusI wish you can get a partner like do you want... And I suggest you to write the outline of this story... Together we learn, right☺
I hope u will get ur ideal partner soon Ghassan. Don't forget to invite me if u want to get married because I will eat a lot wkwk #justkidding
BalasHapusWaww that great criteria, i hope you can found your partner like your want. Btw good work broo
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